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1 Corinthians 13

« on: September 17, 2008, 02:09:38 PM »

(this is only the 2nd or 3rd love song I've ever written...lol)
you can listen to this song at http://www.purevolume.com/laurentreat.

If I Could

I lie awake at night
and I think it might be cuz I haven't heard your voice in a while
I cannot rest my mind
It's a fight for me cuz I keep replaying the words you said last time

There's a lot I have to explain
There's so much I have to say

I don’t want you to think I wouldn’t write a song for you
I would write for hours and not convey what I wanted to
I don’t want you to think I wouldn’t give up time for you
You should know I would give you years if I could

I lie awake at night
I think it might be cuz I need some resolution in my life
I watch the time pass
And i fight to sleep cuz I can't get so caught up, so fast
There’s a lot I want to know
There’s so much I can’t let go

Please don’t assume I don’t care to talk to you
I would talk for hours and not say what I wanted to
I don’t want you to think that I never think of you
Boy I wouldn’t get you off of my mind if I could

I lie awake at night
I think it might be
Cuz I can’t sleep when my day doesn’t feel like it’s through
I can’t sleep when there’s so much to do.

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« Reply #1 on: September 19, 2008, 07:37:25 PM »

nice. because of the curse of dial-up, I can't listen to it, but you did a good job with the words.  Smiley
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INVISIBLE SANDWHICH!!!!!!!

« Reply #2 on: September 21, 2008, 06:14:31 PM »

Would you mind giving YOUR interpretation of YOUR song? What's it about to you?
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1 Corinthians 13

« Reply #3 on: February 09, 2009, 04:17:30 PM »

I wouldn't mind, but why did you capitalize "YOUR" twice?
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